所屬欄目:英國(guó)留學(xué), 英國(guó)碩士申請(qǐng) 發(fā)表時(shí)間:2022-09-22 來(lái)源:本站原創(chuàng)
申請(qǐng)季已至,對(duì)于想去英國(guó)留學(xué)的同學(xué)們來(lái)說(shuō),除了均分院校背景以外,最不容忽視的就屬文書了,一篇好的PS(個(gè)人陳述)既可以幫你贏得招生官的青睞,也可以讓你無(wú)緣名校,止步申請(qǐng)。那對(duì)于像G5、王愛(ài)曼華這類名校的PS要求你又了解多少呢?
根據(jù)院校的不同,專業(yè)的不同,對(duì)于PS的要求也都各不相同。優(yōu)越的文書團(tuán)隊(duì)經(jīng)過(guò)多年打磨,對(duì)英國(guó)各院校的PS要求都有自己的一套針對(duì)性方案。
今天就來(lái)給大家解讀一下愛(ài)丁堡大學(xué)的個(gè)人陳述應(yīng)該如何進(jìn)行寫作才能打動(dòng)招生官!
愛(ài)大PS要求
(截圖來(lái)自愛(ài)丁堡大學(xué)官網(wǎng))
從官網(wǎng)中的說(shuō)明我們能看到愛(ài)大對(duì)PS有四點(diǎn)表述要求:
1.你為什么對(duì)在愛(ài)丁堡學(xué)習(xí)感興趣,
2.你為什么選擇這個(gè)特定的課程?
3.如果你是為了職業(yè)發(fā)展而學(xué)習(xí),你有什么職業(yè)計(jì)劃,你的學(xué)習(xí)將如何支持這些計(jì)劃?
4.如果你有任何其他相關(guān)的經(jīng)驗(yàn).例如有償或自愿的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)或其他地方?jīng)]有說(shuō)明的額外資格,那么請(qǐng)?jiān)谀愕膫€(gè)人陳述中包括這些信息,或者你可以將其添加到申請(qǐng)表中的”相關(guān)知識(shí)/培訓(xùn)技能”欄中。
優(yōu)越專家建議:
1.文書寫作一定要根據(jù)院校特定的要求去有針對(duì)性的表述,不能答非所問(wèn),且在寫作中我們學(xué)習(xí)的課程、申請(qǐng)的項(xiàng)目以及職業(yè)規(guī)劃、實(shí)踐經(jīng)驗(yàn)等都應(yīng)該是一致的方向。
2.特別是第四點(diǎn)關(guān)于工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)這一塊,目前英國(guó)有很多院校對(duì)軟實(shí)力都越來(lái)越看重,那么像愛(ài)大這樣直接在官網(wǎng)中有直接說(shuō)明的,那在文書寫作中就更要注意表達(dá)。
優(yōu)越文書范文
以下示例來(lái)自優(yōu)越留學(xué)文書范文:
1.點(diǎn)明申請(qǐng)?jiān)擁?xiàng)目學(xué)習(xí)興趣
Eg:During the COVID-19 epidemic, most industries were severely disrupted, but one in particular that struggled to cope was the medical field.
In addition, this algorithm can also take other medical data into consideration to help doctors plan treatments.
Hoping to learn more about this area, I have decided to pursue advanced studies at Edinburgh’s Artificial Intelligence MSc programme to take the next step in my professional development.
優(yōu)越點(diǎn)評(píng):從實(shí)事入手,展開學(xué)習(xí)的動(dòng)機(jī),肯定人工智能的強(qiáng)大以及便利,并且表達(dá)出對(duì)該項(xiàng)目產(chǎn)生強(qiáng)烈的學(xué)習(xí)的興趣。
2.說(shuō)明為什么對(duì)愛(ài)丁堡感興趣
eg:The seniors I met at the beginning of my undergraduate were admitted by Edinburgh and they shared with me details about Edinburgh's strength in computer science. In particular, I learned that Edinburgh runs the UK's longest established centre for artificial intelligence that is led by renowned academic faculty members.
優(yōu)越點(diǎn)評(píng):從學(xué)長(zhǎng)出發(fā)了解到愛(ài)丁堡在計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)的優(yōu)勢(shì),緊接著表示對(duì)于愛(ài)丁堡的導(dǎo)師、課程、專業(yè)都非常感興趣,因此想在愛(ài)丁堡去學(xué)習(xí)該模塊。
3.陳述職業(yè)規(guī)劃且支持學(xué)習(xí)的學(xué)術(shù)背景及優(yōu)勢(shì)
職業(yè)規(guī)劃:After graduating, I will return to work as a Technical Department-Algorithm Engineer in Shanghai with the companies I did my two previous internships with (Data Grand & DataCanvas) as they are mainly engaged in the Artificial Intelligence business.
學(xué)術(shù)背景及優(yōu)勢(shì):So far, I have managed to build a substantial foundation while majoring in Information and Computing Science at the Xi'an Jiaotong-Liverpool University by taking a variety of courses.
優(yōu)越點(diǎn)評(píng):非常清晰直接的表達(dá)職業(yè)規(guī)劃,且與申請(qǐng)的項(xiàng)目都是相關(guān)的。緊接著又介紹自己在本科中學(xué)習(xí)的課程,教會(huì)了我機(jī)器學(xué)習(xí)和深度學(xué)習(xí)的真正價(jià)值,尤其是在數(shù)據(jù)分析方面,為我今后在人工智能方面的學(xué)習(xí)奠定了非常全面的基礎(chǔ)。
4.相關(guān)工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)展示
Eg:In addition to my academic achievements, I have also actively pursued opportunities to enhance my hands-on experience.
論文:I am currently completing my final graduation thesis which uses the Generative Adversarial Networks (GANs) to generate pseudo haptic sensation from visual images or generate pseudo visual images from tactile readings from a touch sensor.
實(shí)習(xí):I joined Data Canvas as an intern this past summer where I focused on deep learning and computer vision.
優(yōu)越點(diǎn)評(píng):通過(guò)論文寫作中的科研項(xiàng)目和在Data Canvas公司的實(shí)習(xí),專注于深度學(xué)習(xí)和計(jì)算機(jī)視覺(jué),讓自己的實(shí)踐知識(shí)得到了拓展,對(duì)人工智能方向形成了全面和系統(tǒng)的理解。
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